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    The sun was starting to set and the air was cooling off when Swift was within range of his hometown. He could smell the scents of the bakery and hear the voices of many ponies. He was coming home! He only needed to fly another few hundred feet and he would be here. "I can't believe after all these years I am finally coming home!" He shouted into the evening air. He angled his wing down and rode the air current downwards and landed in one of the streets. A few ponies paid no notice wile a couple others gasped and realized who just landed down. He casually walked along, trying to find a certain pony, and avoid a certain one. He walked for a while before finally seeing the mare he was looking for. His cousin, Derpy Hooves, was standing around near the bakery, enjoying a muffin. He gasped and ran up to her. "Derpy, it's me!". She looked up and her eyes widened "Swift?!". She ran and hugged him tightly. "When did you get back?! Do you have a place to stay?! Are yo-". She was cut off as a orange pony with large wings stepped up. He gave Swift a cold, emotionless stare "You're back" He said bluntly. "It's nice to see you too, Bonfire" Swift replied cautiously. Bonfire just snorted and walked off, stopping to glare back at him. "Seems like he still hates me" Swift whispered to Derpy. "He sadly does" She whispered back. He lead Derpy away from the bakery and out of Bonfire's sight. He looked at her. "I have two questions" he told her. "Ok, go ahead." She nodded. "One, can I stay at your place for now?". "Absolutely! And the next?" She tilted her had to the side as Swift whispered his next question. "Oh her! She live's in everfree forest, but her house is in a patch of poison joke. You going to see her?" she asked. "Yes, I am. I'll come home right after, I promise" He said as he flew off.


    Swift was walking in everfree forest, looking for a patch of poisonous flowers. he wanted to see his old best friend again. He missed her a lot. He wandered until he spotted it. A little house in the patch of blue flowers, secluded from the world. Swift carefully flew over the flowers and knocked on the door. A pony with a blue mane, orange eyes, and blue markings on her face opened the door. "Hel-" She stopped herself as she saw Swift flying above her. She started to get tears. "S-Swift?" She asked him. "Yes Nightfall, it's me" He told Nightfall and smiled. He flew down and gave her a huge hug, her returning the hug. He smiled as she lead him inside. "You're staying near here, in ponyville, right?" She asked him. "Yes, I am staying, and I am not leaving ever again" He said as he smiled. He was finally back where he belonged, and nothing could change that. Right?
Sitting there in a field of relatively poisonous flowers, sat a mare. She was sniffing a poison joke flower, which she was immune too. She had recently been graced with news that made her very happy. He was coming back. Her best friend was coming back. She had missed Swift so much ever since he moved away. He had been her best friend ever since she was a young filly. And now, he was coming back. She resorted to smelling the wonderful smell of the poison joke to fully enjoy the moment. "I can't believe it, I got my best friend back!". She giggled happily and stopped sniffing the flower "And maybe this time I'll make him do silly dares!"
Bonfire kicked a little pebble out of his way in frustration. He only recently received news that his old "friend" was actually returning to Ponyville. Before Swift was forced to move away, he and Bonfire were best friends. They told each other everything, and did everything together. But, as this happens all the time, he and Swift had a big fight, that even got physical. The fight itself was quite violent, and adults needed to split the two. Bonfire raised his hoof to the tiny scar on his cheek that Swift left. He grunted and sat down. The mare next to him couldn't help but squeal in delight when Bonfire told her that Swift was returning. Swift's cousin, Derpy, was running around, freaking out "He's coming back!! You aren't joking, are you?" Derpy asked Bonfire seriously. "No, I'm not," Bonfire replied, and then, in a whisper so Derpy couldn't hear, he added "though I wish I was"
Swift was feeling tired. Traveling for so many days seem to have gotten to him. He was thirsty and was barely awake. "C'mon, I can do this...it can't be much further.." He had finally escaped the prison of a land his parents made him live at, and he was finally heading home. He couldn't wait to see his cousin and friends. Derpy and Bonfire would be thrilled to see him. Then again, he was worried about Bonfire. When he moved away, the two had a argument that lead to a fight. He didn't know if Bonfire still held the grudge. Swift shook the thought out of his head and readjusted his wings as he felt a current of air blow under him. The wind carried him forward, easing his stress "Eh, I'll be there when I get there"
    The sun was starting to set and the air was cooling off when Swift was within range of his hometown. He could smell the scents of the bakery and hear the voices of many ponies. He was coming home! He only needed to fly another few hundred feet and he would be here. "I can't believe after all these years I am finally coming home!" He shouted into the evening air. He angled his wing down and rode the air current downwards and landed in one of the streets. A few ponies paid no notice wile a couple others gasped and realized who just landed down. He casually walked along, trying to find a certain pony, and avoid a certain one. He walked for a while before finally seeing the mare he was looking for. His cousin, Derpy Hooves, was standing around near the bakery, enjoying a muffin. He gasped and ran up to her. "Derpy, it's me!". She looked up and her eyes widened "Swift?!". She ran and hugged him tightly. "When did you get back?! Do you have a place to stay?! Are yo-". She was cut off as a orange pony with large wings stepped up. He gave Swift a cold, emotionless stare "You're back" He said bluntly. "It's nice to see you too, Bonfire" Swift replied cautiously. Bonfire just snorted and walked off, stopping to glare back at him. "Seems like he still hates me" Swift whispered to Derpy. "He sadly does" She whispered back. He lead Derpy away from the bakery and out of Bonfire's sight. He looked at her. "I have two questions" he told her. "Ok, go ahead." She nodded. "One, can I stay at your place for now?". "Absolutely! And the next?" She tilted her had to the side as Swift whispered his next question. "Oh her! She live's in everfree forest, but her house is in a patch of poison joke. You going to see her?" she asked. "Yes, I am. I'll come home right after, I promise" He said as he flew off.


    Swift was walking in everfree forest, looking for a patch of poisonous flowers. he wanted to see his old best friend again. He missed her a lot. He wandered until he spotted it. A little house in the patch of blue flowers, secluded from the world. Swift carefully flew over the flowers and knocked on the door. A pony with a blue mane, orange eyes, and blue markings on her face opened the door. "Hel-" She stopped herself as she saw Swift flying above her. She started to get tears. "S-Swift?" She asked him. "Yes Nightfall, it's me" He told Nightfall and smiled. He flew down and gave her a huge hug, her returning the hug. He smiled as she lead him inside. "You're staying near here, in ponyville, right?" She asked him. "Yes, I am staying, and I am not leaving ever again" He said as he smiled. He was finally back where he belonged, and nothing could change that. Right?

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Trevor M.
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Hello everyone, I am SwiftStorm73 and welcome to my Deviantart page. I don't really upload (part of this reason is I am very bad at drawing, wish my brother would draw more for this page) anyways welcome and have fun


"If you don't succeed, try again. You'd be surprised how often it works."
"No matter how bad things seem for you, remember this...There is still chances for you"
"Friends are a light when the world becomes dark, and that light will get brighter if you are a friend to yourself." ~ Trevor
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:iconflamietwo: ~ "found it on tumblr"

About My OC's:

SwiftStorm: SwiftStorm is a Pegasus who flies really fast and loves to make new friends. He likes to play games and even sometimes writes. He has had a rivalry with RainbowDash ever since he was a colt. SwiftStorm's cousin is Derpy but she is more like a sister to him, as they do everything together. He even has a best friend named Nightfall, who he spends a lot of time with. When he was a colt, SwiftStorm had to move away from Ponyville, but he returned and now resides there.

Bonfire:
Bonfire is a Pegasus with very large wings. He is a very sneaky, sly, and secretive pony. When he was a colt he was best friends with SwiftStorm, but when he moved away something changed Bonfire. In his spare time, Bonfire plays tricks on ponies. Bonfire was outcast by his family. The only member of his family who talks to him is his little sister, Spitfire. Spitfire looks up to Bonfire, inheriting his attitude. Ever since Swift came back, Bonfire has been plotting a revenge...

Lynx Pixel: COMING SOON

Sky Storm: COMING SOON


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"Nothing can't happen"
"Beat you there!"
"That didn't look good..."
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PegasusAF Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2016  New Deviant
Azurestorm Ok Hand Emoji 
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RCFlashFreak Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
eyyy wazap, budd!!
>w<
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SwiftStorm73 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Eyyy, how's it going? Been a bit since we last talked ^^
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RCFlashFreak Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yup^^ havent been out lately cuz i was doin animu stuff
how bout you whats the news?
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SwiftStorm73 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Been cheated on twice if that's a thing
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Astralseed Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2016  Professional General Artist
Thanks for the watch!  Heart
If you happen to be on Tumblr, do check me out over there as well if you'd like to see all of the art I upload that doesn't make it to DA. 
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Blitzenoo Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2016  Student General Artist
Hey Swift, you okay there? Haven't been hearing from you at all.
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Cloudzapper8 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2016
happy birthday and have a amazing good day ^w^ <3 Super Fantastic Golden Platter Cake 3D 
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SwiftStorm73 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much ^^
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Cloudzapper8 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2016
no problem ^w^
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